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Cloud Chaser by KittyMoonmist Cloud Chaser by KittyMoonmist
Left is what she should look like. I only took the wings off on the right so you could see her cutie mark.
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chikichi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
a few suggestions for your OC...
1. Don't use a main character's mane. ESPECIALLY the most obvious ones, like Rarity or Twilight.
2. Don't use a rainbow mane. It's been done once, it doesn't need to be done 1,000,000,000 more times.
3. Please please PLEASE don't make her an alicorn. It looks SUPER Mary Sueish
4. Try to use more light colours. This may be nitpicking, but try to use more light colours, at least for the body.
5. Don't use a cannon character's name. It'll make people thing that your OC is a rip-off.
If you want to make a good OC, try to make one that'll fit into this crowd: images5.fanpop.com/image/photo…
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HiroMorisato Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome.
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KittyMoonmist Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Thank you. :D
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